Well, this is probably as good as we get visually in this otherwise not-really-pleasing annex.

It seems a bit odd that the section number (which is part of the change description) is before the paragraph number. Putting a paragraph number before the section number might look a bit strange, though. Let's try adding a "Something:" before each such section number list, and moving the paragraph numbers before those.

Some possible options for the "Something": "Modified rule", "Affected wording", "See", "Clause or Subclause".

I've created #1837 which uses "Affected subclause" and also cleans up a few oddities in section references throughout [diff].

We'll probably use #1837 instead.